Tuesday 17 September 2019

My 2019 speech

hi this is my 2019 speech it was hard to make so please sit back and relax

2 comments:

  1. Hello Taylor.
    I like how you did your speech on something almost everyone loves, SLEEPING!
    All the photos are very good and I like how you put who they were taken by.
    A thing you could work on is to make what you were say clearer and, or be in a quieter space.
    From Jemma.

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  2. i love how your speech is about sleeping because i love to sleep at home but maybe you could speak a little louder but over all i like your speech

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